Writer's Notebook


My First Story
  • Fatıma is from Afganistan and she is muslim but her town inside a war. She is so sad and she is scaring. Her parents was died and her have a little brother only. They are hungry because haven't food.
My Name Story
  • When I heard my name story, I couldn't believe. This was impossible because my name is changed. Sergen Yalçın was famous footballer in Beşiktaş and he goal scored in an important match. So my name changed  Haktan to Sergen but I get oriented to my name
Holiday Discoveries
  • Gökçe went to Bulgaria and she tasted rabbit meat. She learnt a war ship.
  • I played war games: Call of Duty and Crysis 3 and I learnt new tactical attacs.
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Jelly Beans


This video is about the number of days one person lives.If I had one day left, I would find my old friends my feelings, emotions. and entered my life peoples and I would tell hem how I feel about they.

Fake Empire


We connected to technology and unnecessary things. These reduce the conversation between people. We must leave like this things.

I think this video describing the present situation of human being and they showed very well. This video reciting people caring a lot of unnecessary thing and we must leave this things. So, we will be more social by this means.
I founded somethings about of me from this video. I doing like this video's people, I connecting to technology and I being unsociable. I must changing my behaviors and I must have more social and better life.

What would my sentence be?

In this activity, we watched a video about explain myself. In the video, some teenegers shared own sentences.

Here my sentence:
"He was like Titanic; he was magnificent but he was ruined."
                                                                       Sergen K. Çotak

I choose this sentence because I wanted do some philosophy and simile.


Our Pirate Story


Sit kids, I’m gonna tell you a little story… about how I got my wooden leg.


kids:ugh for the seventh time??!


captain: It gets better every time doesn’t it?:D


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Today was it. Today was the day I would finally get out of this floating hell. As the
cleaner, I was going up the stairs to the upper deck from my rotten cabin. I was worn-out of cleaning the toilets every single day. But today was going to be my escape from the monotone awful life of mine. I started cleaning while singing.
‘’Aye Mitchell singing with your terrible voice won’t make those loos get any less dirtier!’’ said Bruce.
‘’Yeah mind your own business Bruce!’’
‘’You’ll clean toilets forever! ahahahahha’’
‘I couldn’t help but laugh
‘hah! you think?’
I was thinking
‘’Hah! I’ll never have to see these filthy people again!... I hope.’’


‘’GOOD MORNING! GOOD MORNING!’’
I grinned as I heard the only source of joy I had in that  hideous place. Biscuit came flying and landed on my sore shoulder.
‘’We’re going to fly away from this hell today.’’
I whispered to him.
‘’FLY AWAY FROM THIS HELL! FLY AWA-’’
‘Are you out of your mind?!’’
I shutted him down. I saw the second captain staring at me but then he rolled his eyes and looked away. Phew! It wasn’t ruined at all I guess.


When the sun went down, my plan was up. I slowly sneaked out of my cabinet to go to the life-saving boat.PÜSKEVİT was already waiting outside of the cabinet. We tiptoed to the small orange boat. I was shocked. I stopped with fear and astonishment when I saw the captain standing in the boat. It was over. Everything was ruined.  Suddenly the captain took out his gun and pointed it towards me. I gulped and I couldn’t move. ‘’Where do you think you’re going Mitch!?’’
He spitted and then grinned. My ears exploded just like my heart was goin to in seconds. It was as if the time slowed down. What? Suddenly I saw feathers flying in the air. Blue, yellow, green feathers with red blood covered. ‘’noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!’’
I screamed my parrot was dead. Then I heard another fire shot. This time it was me. I was shot in my left leg. OUCH!  


And see kids, that’s the story of how I got my wooden leg.


kids:wait what happened after?!  What happened to the captain? How are you alive?
        
Well, that’s another story. 


Travel, Eat, Learn
                       
- I would want to see the important buildings like Empire States Building, Pisa Tower, Eiffel Tower, Great Wall of China...
-I would want to eat most famous food of their counties like taco, sushi...
-I would want to learn their culture, living style and religion.


Geri's Game

Geri's Game -This video about how can a people cheating own and how he can be happy with this.
-I didn't feel anything and this video. This video not relate in my life.

Why I hate school but love education

Schools kill our creativity. Schools just a dump of concrete. Creativity can't born from a dump they just destroy our creativity. If schools if not school world'll be more creative and more successful. He talked about great mans and their success. He is thinking education is a key for success but school is obstacle for this way. He is talking about schools are a obstacle why he going to school and why he shoot a video front of a school?

In Praise of the Useless

I believe you know, you sit a bank front of sea, you see eternal horizon and waves. Waves hit to seaside. You hear a sweet, perfect voice. That is a rustle but that voice have a sense for you. It is your inside voice. Here, these quotations was a sea rustle for me. When I read these sentences I felt very big thing in my chest, that wasn't happiness, that wasn't sadness, that wasn't excitement... That was all things. I believe the this speech, to Mike Hays. Our student life is hardest student life at world and good parts that we left behind may come to rescue to add dimension to our life, to make our life richer. Also I believe these quotation'll change my life.

Voices and Thoughts

We closed our eyes and we listened the outside. A word came to my mind; 'sleep'. I almost sleep. We were write a poem about our word and we did but I did write a very different poem. My poem isn't about sleep. My poem have love, missing, hope. There are everything but sleep. I'm going to share with you my poem, it is Turkish, I hope you will love it.

Sen ne güzel şeysin öyle
Beni benden alan
İnsanın ruhunu çalan
Kendimi bildim bileli
Görmedim böylesine ebedi
Sonsuzluğa doğru bir yolsun
Hayatım yok çünkü sen yoksun
Bir gül bahçesinde
Seninle beraber yerde
Hayal et, düşün
Ne kadar fazla ünün
Bu böyle, senden kaçış yok
Adeta vurdun kalbime bir ok
Artık sen sen değilsin
Unutamam senin sevgin.

Book Conversations

-11/22/63
-"Sometimes, we can think; "some events is bad" but we can't know they are good events for us.
-We did a good and funny discussion at story circle, almost everyone shared their books and quotes. I realized there were very different quotes and books. I shared my book, too. My book was 11/22/63 by Stephen King, I was read this book at 2011 and this is my second favorite book. It is about date of assasiante of Kenedy.


Support or Push?
We watched this video and we read this blog. Also, our teacher asked to us; what we prefer, support or push,both of them, vşdeo and blog, was about support and push. I think support is better, because support is first, if didn't work that time you can do push. Anyway, especially video affected me because that was true, that was life, I think this video has very deep meaning. It isn't just a teaching. It was making feel to person very complicated emotions. Blog was good and it has deep meanning, too. But, I dunno, it was unnecessary and it isn't very affecting. I didn't like it so much.

My Bucket List
We watched this video, this video about the bucket list of 4 years old child. Purpose of this video was about dirtiness water but actually it was telling a bucket list, his bucket list was awesome, I liked it. After we watched the video we did a fishbowl, it was like a sharing circle and we shared 3 things in the our bucket list. I heard very interesting things. Here my bucket list:

-Read the whole books of Stephen King
-Take some drug before I die
-Sexual intercourse

I learnt somethings about myself. I wonder the banned things and I wrote the sexual intercourse because I wonder, everyone said, how can say it this is shame but I don't scare tell the truths.

Rhoda Meets Rhoda


Rhoda shocked. She was looking to her. She was exactly same. Same face, same body. How? How she came to her earth? Suddenly, she understood. She had kill anyone at the another earth and she had not give the ticket to anyone and now she was find her. Rhoda wasn't know what she should do. There is a very rough silent and Rhoda opened her arms to both two sides and steped to second Rhoda.
That moment she felt a heat on her chest. Her dress was soaked. Her body began to weaken. Her legs was weaken and the blood was flowing to ground. Second Rhoda was shot to Rhoda. She was crying and she was holding a gun on her hand.
Rhoda fell to ground. She was trying take breath. She used her last power and said: "Why...? Wh...?" She couldn't talk and croughed. Rhode Two came close to Rhoda and explained: "How? How you could this? Did you killed a family, really? You drunk! You drunk and killed two life! You're murderer, you don't deserve to live."
"How? Lea...rn?" and vomited some blood.
"While I'm waiting a man closed to me. His name is John. Do you remember? He said; 'You killed my family' I wasn't understood at the first time but he explained to me every-thing. Go to hell!" and shot. Then came one more time and one and one. She shot six times and Rhoda had died. 
Now, there was one more step. She inserted the gun into her mouth. 




11 comments:

  1. Your entries are really interesting. Especially I liked the first entry.

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  2. I really liked your stories and what do you think about your new war games? Is it good or bad?

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  3. I agree with you that the places that you wrote are certainly the places everyone wants to visit. But do you only want to visit towers? Not natural places?

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    1. Yes because I want see that things.

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    2. I think we can have a different point of view with emotions ofcourse. Well thats my opinion ofc

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  4. I would like to see Empire States Building too. Also learning the culture of a community sound very interesting and awesome to me.

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  5. You are really creative Sergen. Because first question's aim was to ask you countries or citys. But as I said, you are really creative. And I think you are the most creative boy in the class.

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    1. Thank you for your tribute I liked and I been happy.

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  6. I'm sure that it relates to your life in a way. Just think carefully!

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  7. I think you have a passion like Geri's chess passion, just you should learn about it.

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